Zebras

Dear Santa

Dear Santa,

Happy christmas

and happy New year

how is the weather in north pole it is rain in hawks bay  

are you elves good

Do you really like live in the north pole?

Will in Christmas I play Christmas game with my family mum pours in a cup of wine and sets in the sun out on on the deck a day after Christmas my grandma and aunty came down for a week also we have a Christmas dinner

What i will love and like for Christmas

May i please  have this thing for Christmas  

a  real puppy

tummy stuffer

little live pet

kinetic sand

Hair stuff

Bike (purple or pink)

membership on animal jam

nerf rebel

robo

Christmas day

x-factor

Universe

Glasgow Netball

The Holiday

                                                              Success Criteria

DEEP FEATURES Brainstorms to identify main ideas to be used in writing. Uses most of the main ideas in the writing. Uses paragraphs and sequences ideas. Attempts to end writing with a simple conclusions.

SURFACE FEATURES Spells most words correctly. Uses capital letters, full stops, commas, apostrophes, question marks, exclamation marks.

THE REWORKER / EDITOR Rereads writing to edit out ainformation that does not improve the message. Rereads writing to edit in words and phrases that improve the message. Uses a dictionary to identify and check spelling attempts. Checks writing for basic punctuation.

I  got into the car and it  took a long time for us to get there. Yay we’re here! I jumped out of the car and ran down the deep hill. “Ow ow ow” I got cut from the side of the tree. I jumped in and splash, the water came.

Yum Yum, ice cream. I had ice cream. My nan got it for 75c. I had vanilla and my big sister had cookies and cream. There were 8 cookies and cream and 8 vanilla. It was yum. Yum yum!

Yesterday I went to the skate bowl with 2 of my sisters and my cousin. We went there because it was a new skate bowl, but I was really, really scared.

Shopping is fun. I got for a toy, a book and pens. They were cool.

      

New Zealand Flag

Super Squid Wow Words

Stoney Creek Ranch Camp

A moment in time...

When Mum Turns Off The Light

I heard the tv as my sister is watching it.

I heard the birds on the roof of my room.

I felt the wind on my feet.

I felt cold as the wind came into my room.

I wondered if the wind will come onto my face.

I wondered if my mum will come and put me to bed.

I saw my cat on my bed lay down on my bed.

I saw my shadow.

By Te Atawhai

Rabbits

The Sea

Queenstown

Puppies

Olympics

New Zealand

Scratch

In class I have been learning about the points of the compass and directions.

This week I learnt about a programme called Scratch which uses directions to create a little computer program.

My job was to use Scratch to create something that could be shared with the rest of the class. What my Scratch was about was all down to me and my imagination! I had to be creative!

Click on the green flag to start and the red octagon to stop.

Swimming Sports

Swimming Sports is where the Year 4s, 5s and 6s at Havelock North Primary take part in swimming races in their houses. We then had to create a voki for homework about one of the races.

Our voki needed to tell the class about our favourite race at swimming sports and why we liked that one the best. We had to remember to hook our listener in and give the audience lots of interesting information.