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As I head  to the start line, eyes dazzling in the dusting black sky.  Paws sinking in the soil I roll my muscles balance on my fourth leg, shake, shake

As I wobble my leg side to side, getting ready to sprint off. Blood flowing through my body my heart pounding every second, bums up ready to run,”ready face on”. 3,2,1 as the animals, get ready to race.

“Go” as the loud clappers go, as I sprint running to win the gold medal.The dirt comes up off the ground 10 inches up to my feet run,run,run as the wind blows to my face. As all of the animals start to pump their arms and water dropping from my head.  

By Te Atawhai

This is my box,for a highlighter
It has the same sides as a highlighter
It has 6 faces,edges 9,vertices

The Old Alley By Richard

My sofa

Green sofa bouncy

Cold holes getting colder

Dusty rubbish lying

Comfy cotton standing waiting  

Fun collectables you can found

Shining money waiting to be found

Slaking fabric cold

This is my favourite place

      swimming

            kicking,pulling

           wet,diving,winning

           nerves,breathing,  

            water ever were

            cheering people

                    sports

 Bow line

We are practising our knots for Optimist Yachting

Figure of eight

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5.Cold Winter with heaters

7.People wrapped in blankets by the heaters

5.No more going out

7.Only cocoa beans left girls

5.Time to sleep good night

7.Empty trees iced houses cold people

Show Not till

Within 6 minutes we were there

3 minutes sitting  on the bus.

Shaking so hard

Wobbling my feet  like Mad

time is ticking

we Jump out of the bus

Counting in my head.

Lyndel said well done and ticked my name.

I ride back to the line  hanging my fingertips on the side of the handlebar.

Time to go to the light track lifted my back wheel up.

Wobbling,

Shaking,

Turning,

Counting,

and then and then and then, lunch time.

The movie was usual enough

The Movies was usual enough; it had

A screen, a roof, A movie, a sky.

people, drinks ,pop corn, ice blocks.

Over it, and even a small tin bin.

I never went to the movie and watch home.

My sister, my cousins and I

did what girls do talk and laugh.

watching the movie while laughing, enjoy the movie.

eating  popcorn, watched and listened while watching home.

just finished movie love it

Doing nothing important

Zebras

Dear Santa

Dear Santa,

Happy christmas

and happy New year

how is the weather in north pole it is rain in hawks bay  

are you elves good

Do you really like live in the north pole?

Will in Christmas I play Christmas game with my family mum pours in a cup of wine and sets in the sun out on on the deck a day after Christmas my grandma and aunty came down for a week also we have a Christmas dinner

What i will love and like for Christmas

May i please  have this thing for Christmas  

a  real puppy

tummy stuffer

little live pet

kinetic sand

Hair stuff

Bike (purple or pink)

membership on animal jam

nerf rebel

robo

Christmas day

x-factor

Universe

Glasgow Netball

The Holiday

                                                              Success Criteria

DEEP FEATURES Brainstorms to identify main ideas to be used in writing. Uses most of the main ideas in the writing. Uses paragraphs and sequences ideas. Attempts to end writing with a simple conclusions.

SURFACE FEATURES Spells most words correctly. Uses capital letters, full stops, commas, apostrophes, question marks, exclamation marks.

THE REWORKER / EDITOR Rereads writing to edit out ainformation that does not improve the message. Rereads writing to edit in words and phrases that improve the message. Uses a dictionary to identify and check spelling attempts. Checks writing for basic punctuation.

I  got into the car and it  took a long time for us to get there. Yay we’re here! I jumped out of the car and ran down the deep hill. “Ow ow ow” I got cut from the side of the tree. I jumped in and splash, the water came.

Yum Yum, ice cream. I had ice cream. My nan got it for 75c. I had vanilla and my big sister had cookies and cream. There were 8 cookies and cream and 8 vanilla. It was yum. Yum yum!

Yesterday I went to the skate bowl with 2 of my sisters and my cousin. We went there because it was a new skate bowl, but I was really, really scared.

Shopping is fun. I got for a toy, a book and pens. They were cool.

      

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